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Clew
Joined: 18 Dec 2009 Posts: 60
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 4:13 am Post subject: Sunshine
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Your ignorance was enticing
But I saw its fragility
Fractures in the pillars
Trust in my humble quake
I was drunk and you were blind
Who will drive this time?
The anchors that hold you down?
Or my halo simulated crown?
Here, let me help you
Four is greater than two
Together we can crawl
To point before the fall
What a silly thing to do
Put a face on the mind
Lets sever the chains
And leave the lies behind
Convinced of our rise
Shredding the disguise
But the air was stale
With a hidden compromise
The drunk leading the blind
My breath stings your eye
I stumble in your shadows
The collision and division
Sleep well my love
As the shards fall
Our paths unite in time
In the eternal bliss of Sunshine
I just wrote this, inspired by some poems on here by other members. Let me know what ya think
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lenred Site Veteran
Joined: 01 Jan 2008 Posts: 1512 Location: US
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:36 pm Post subject:
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Very creative Clew. Bring us more sunshine!
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